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Why can’t I just ask you,
If you feel the same way?
It’s driving me mad with curiosity
But I can’t do anything about it!

How do you do this to me?
Do you know what you’re doing,
Or are you oblivious to it all,
Including my feelings for you?

Is that look in your eye,
There for me and only me?
Or am I reading too much into this,
And being delusional?

Are you as reluctant as you seem
To let me slip out of your arms when you hug me?
When you’re quiet are you thinking
Of how to say what I’m trying to phrase as well?

Why are you so complex
When guys are supposed to be simple minded?
Is there more than meets the eye,
Or am I just imagining it?
©2008-2009 =panKakes91
:iconpankakes91:

Author's Comments

OKAY!
so this is different from my usual writing...
but this was inspired by a friend, :iconsoulxposed:, SouLXposed
and this is dedicated to her!!
:D
she is amazing, BTW... be sure to check out her gallery!!

full title: Questions From My Exposed Soul
and YES! that is a play on her name!!

hope you enjoy!!

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:iconsoulxposed:
OMG!!! I officially love you to death!!! :glomp: I LOVE it!! It is EXACTLY what I've been feeling!! He is waayy too complex lol... My friends are convinced that he knows everything... he probably does, I am not the best at keeping secrets
hehehe. I love the title too
and thank you for the compliments! :blushes:

--
I tear my heart open. I sew myself shut. My weakness is, that I care too much. And my scars remind me, that the past is real. I tear my heart open, just to feel.
:iconpankakes91:
:D
yay!!!
lol
thank you!!!
:hug: :iconnewglomop:
and you are so completely awesome!!
you so deserved the whole thing!!! :D
and he is probably sitting in the same place as you!!
i'm sticking with the fact that you should tell him!!!
lol

--
I have a story!!!
Vampire Romance if you're interested
[link] thats the link!!

new writing club,
amazing place!!
[link]
ScribeSanturary!!!
Check it Out!!
:iconsoulxposed:
haha.. I reallly want to.. I was considering doing it on my birthday (next week) but I'm not sure if I want to ruin my memorial day weekend if he doesn't like me back........

--
I tear my heart open. I sew myself shut. My weakness is, that I care too much. And my scars remind me, that the past is real. I tear my heart open, just to feel.
:iconpankakes91:
:nod:
i understand that...
but idk i just have this weird feeling that he does...
how about... tomorrow? LOL
just ask him or tell him whenever you suddenly get the urge
^^
make it natural :)

--
I have a story!!!
Vampire Romance if you're interested
[link] thats the link!!

new writing club,
amazing place!!
[link]
ScribeSanturary!!!
Check it Out!!
:iconsoulxposed:
haha, yea
It's realllly funny, one of my friends keeps thinking that we're together already.. She (doesn't really talk to him that much) and was about to go up to him in the hallway at school to tell him what was wrong with me. LOL
I might just tell him tomorrow... Hopefully your feeling is right!!!

--
I tear my heart open. I sew myself shut. My weakness is, that I care too much. And my scars remind me, that the past is real. I tear my heart open, just to feel.
:iconpankakes91:
i hope so!!!
:D
LOL
aren't friends the greatest? :XD:

--
I have a story!!!
Vampire Romance if you're interested
[link] thats the link!!

new writing club,
amazing place!!
[link]
ScribeSanturary!!!
Check it Out!!
:iconsoulxposed:
They are! omg I'm really wishing that he likes me! :XD:

--
I tear my heart open. I sew myself shut. My weakness is, that I care too much. And my scars remind me, that the past is real. I tear my heart open, just to feel.
:iconpankakes91:
i'm really wishing he does too!!
ohh this is so cute!!
:D

--
I have a story!!!
Vampire Romance if you're interested
[link] thats the link!!

new writing club,
amazing place!!
[link]
ScribeSanturary!!!
Check it Out!!
:iconsoulxposed:
Hahahaha.. all of my friends think we'd make a really cute couple LOL thanks :blushes:

--
I tear my heart open. I sew myself shut. My weakness is, that I care too much. And my scars remind me, that the past is real. I tear my heart open, just to feel.

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